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Post by Lucien Dolos on Apr 25, 2013 16:02:11 GMT -5
This is first and foremost a school. The Basics
Name: Lucien Dolos Codename: Type of Character: Original Species: Mutant Play-by or Voice Actor: Lucas Cruikshank. Age: 15 Gender: Male Sexual Preference: Straight Height: 5"4 Weight: 180 lbs
Faction: New Mutants School Year:Freshman Occupation: Artist (Free Lance.) Student.
Tough break Scott, doing the school play with pale gloomy and grumpy over there. The Details
Body Type: Lucien is not the strongest person by any means and does not have well defined muscles. For someone his age he is quite scrawny. His body does not look like it could hold it's own in a fight without some serious aid. Jeff has black hair styled up in a flat top and blue eyes.
Wardrobe: Lucien normally wears a white jacket, a blue tanktop...black jeans and brown sensible shoes made out of Leather. The jacket is made out of Nomex and the tank top is made out of cotton.
Costume: Other than his normal attire Lucien simply paints a mask over his entire face that changes his clothes to a blue and silver body suit...and acts as a voice changer. Posture: Lucien is often shy and timid around people. This shows as he does not often approach them and has a nervous twitch when around adults. Due to the trauma Lucien always is tense when people have their hands behind their backs. Lucien also tends to shudder at loud noises or similar as he is very easy to scare.
Personality:
Easily frightened Lucien has withdrawn into himself because of beatings by his parents. .In addition he hates pain (his pain) and prefers not to fight if he can avoid it. Yet sometimes it seems he must battle against people.
So in battle he becomes cold and calculating and analytical on his enemies. Few people can befriend him due to the shell of coldness he constantly projects to drive people away.
Lucien while being multi-lingual does not understand why people fight it out. Lucien also has a hard time starting up conversation. Further he is not very self confident and it will take a lot to bring him out of his shell. Sometimes Lucien likes to run away from battles.
Lucien also kind of is angry at his dad for whipping him and sad that his mom sacrificed himself. Other than that, Lucien also has compassion for the poor he comes across and tries to help them in some way if possible. If not possible he still pities.
Lucien is distrustful of humans due to his dad to some degree and will not open to them up easily. When around mutants he is also nervous and sort of withdrawn. It would take a lot to get him to open up out of his shell.
Turn Ons: Kind people Cheerful People. People who are not drunk Calm Music Libraries Quiet places
Turn Offs: Jerks Bullies Enemies Loud music Loud Noises Drunks Worst Secret: His dad whipped him Character Goals: **Two year Goal - Survive at Xavier's, learn to control his power. **Five year Goal - Become the world's greatest Artist.
So... got any cool powers? Powers and Abilities
Genetic Mutation: Art: The way this is explained is that when he draws certain items they literally come off of the paper they are drawn on and appear near him fully functional. This power does have limits such as he cannot draw any weapons of mass destruction for example IE Nuclear Bombs or similar. This also means this is only applied to pictures he himself draws, not ones he colors in or similar for other people.
Furthermore Photoshopping pictures does not work either with the use of this ability. It has to be done on paper or other mediums that are not digital because his power is not digitally based. Granted with a Tablet or Ipad he could utilize his powers as that can be seen by other people easier and is easy to carry.
This power also has downsides. For one thing he cannot draw anything living and even if he did the power would not work. For he cannot control living things. Any form of damage to the medium drawn on and the art immediately vanishes.
Well he draws with whatever tools...but he must be physically touching the tool. Like if he was using a Stylus on a screen, must be holding the Stylus. This applies to any tool. Except for desk top computers as he is in physical contact with them.
Weaknesses: Lack of Material: Without the resources to draw, paint or sketch his power is useless.
Lack of Imagination: Should he be unable to imagine the drawing and every aspect of it popping off of the page it will not happen.
Easily scared: Lucien is easily scared and when afraid has a harder time using his power.
Nervous: Lucien is often nervous around people.
Shy: Lucien is often shy around people as well. Learned Abilities: Soccer: While no expert Lucien does practice every now and then with Soccer.
Hand to Hand Combat: A novice at this Lucien does not possess much skill in it and is afraid actually to put said skill to use even if he could.
Multi Lingual: Lucien knows several languages and often speaks with various accents to confuse people such as his dad. Jeff can speak Spanish, English, Japanese, Chinese.
Resources: Premade Drawings: Lucien possesses 5 Premade drawings that just need to be colored in and signed by him. These drawings are all of one idea of his...shoes that allow him to run away and run away quickly. They last for 5 posts. Eventually he might expand his arsenal.
Credit Card: A credit card he was given by someone for drawing them a new house.
Art Supplies: All forms of art supplies that exist are stored inside a Pocket Dimensional Unit he keeps on his person for obvous reasons.
Education: High School: Lucien has up to a high school level of education though most of it has been done online because of his dad.
So why not tell them the Truth Charles? The History Lucien was born to Rezick and Eilana Dolos in New York City. When he was born the parents were overjoyed. At least at first they were overjoyed. One night when he was three his dad gave him some artist supplies and low and behold he drew a picture of a knife. The knife came right out of the paper and when Rezick broke the knife, it did not work.
Finally he destroyed the paper and that ended the knife. Rezick took a whip to his 3 year old soon. This caused Eilana to take Lucien and move out of state but she was pursued and gunned down when he was about 10.
At 11 Lucien was hired by someone who had lost their house in a fire and did not have the money to rebuild once they found out about his power. The pay was free room and board for a month and so Lucien accepted. Drawing a new house he made sure to detail it as being made out of brick insead of normal wood so it could not be burned down as easily.
When his dad discovered him Lucien was given a credit card by the kindly gentleman and told to flee so he could survive. His dad killed the man that helped Lucien and continued hunting him down as best he could.
After making some deals and selling some of his art work a shy and pained Lucien has come back to the city of New York in order to enroll in Xavier's. Perhaps there he might be safe.
All schools have tests. Sample Post (Taken from Opposing Kingdoms, A nation builder Rp site.)
The Helmet of Evolix was the making of an old fool and so Terrence appeared in the Ancient Chronicles and promptly entered his work shop. Something more than the helmet would need to be crafted and here was where he would make his creation. No, this would not be like the Helmet of Evolix or even close to what the helmet did. The Bios Armor was complete at long last and true he had that, but he needed something else and so he went to his forge. Neo Obsidia would appear and for hours Terrence would hammer away at the forge using the knowledge of the place in which he was to aid him in the crafting of this blade. The blade could channel elemental properties applied to it and would also be able to send out energy waves with each slash to cut an opponent.
But it was still not strong enough. Changing his outfit back from a Toga to the normal clothes he wore, Terrence would continue smithing at the sword a while longer. The idea came to him that he should not wield one sword. Another forge would appear and finally after about six hours the products would be made. Two identical swords that contained the properties to channel the elements and also to send out energy waves with each slash to cut an opponent but that was not enough as the Helmet had lost the abilities it had.
The Zarethians had a technology, powered weapons. It was essentially creating an energy field around ordinary blades and so Terrence went to work building a similar implement out of bits and pieces and attached it to both of the swords that he now carried. The Helmet might have failed him but Terrence would learn on his own how to do this and how to call forth the abilities he had.
This is not all that he would go onto make however as Terrence would also spend time working on a shield of sorts that could generate a barrier equivalent to a Force Field. It would be one of the few implements capable of blocking the Blades of Eternity. Those blades would be quite useful and so would the shield be in the coming days. So he continued to slave over the Hot Forge.
Terrence would continue his work at his lab and once the blades had been finished would walk to an arena of sorts he had set up. There he would summon about a dozen Golems and would use the blades of eternity to perform an attack he had been working on.
The Pariah Slash was something he had been studying in the records of this place and had managed to replicate. Granted his skill with this new technique left a lot to be desired but at the moment Terrence did not care. The Golems fell apart due to the sheer speed that Terrence had unleashed upon them. Using his Narrikian racial abilities was becoming easier with every practice he did.
At one point he would be ready for the tournament and able to deal with the threat of the Templar Order. The blades of Eternity would then be sheathed at his waist and he would pull out the Shield of Eternity and put it on his arm. Fire balls would shoot from the ceiling at him and he would use the shield to stand his ground and redirect the fire balls back at the launchers he had created. Yes, his skills were getting stronger but he would need something to make him last longer.
At long last his first two inventions were done. Ivan eat your heart out. Terrence had some skills and this had proven he was good to some degree at craftsmanship. But there was a lot more that needed to be done and so he walked through the place until he came across a room he had never seen before. It was called the vault and contained various things having been made by the Kytoris of the past and so he went through the stuff in the room and found a set of gloves. Reading the plaque next to them, he read the words Titan Gloves. They granted massive amounts of physical strength to the wearer enough to rip apart a capital ship without shielding with your bare hands. Those could definitely come in handy for him and so he would stuff them into his pockets.
Also found in the room in display cases were several old weapons. Two knives of a unique metal and ability would also be found. Holsters for them would materialize on his garments and Terrence would stuff the knives into the holsters. How many secrets did this place hold? And then he went and found a couple of Tonfa that seemed to radiate the power of space. "What are these I wonder?" Once he had examined them, he would once more fade from this location after taking the Tonfa with him....there was another stop he had to make after all.
The Player
Your Name: Shrike RP Experience: 2 years + How did you find us?: Ad on another site
The End
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Post by Bobby Drake on Apr 25, 2013 17:30:38 GMT -5
Sendt a review on chatango
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Post by Lucien Dolos on Apr 25, 2013 17:42:01 GMT -5
Edited.
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Post by Bobby Drake on Apr 25, 2013 17:49:56 GMT -5
A great improvement and things fixed, that’s good Now, just a little more. Faction should be changed to New Mutants, as he is too young to be a X-Men member. New Mutants would basically mean that he is a student at Xavier’s School. Could you add some more about his general appearance in Body type? Just mention his hair, eyes, etc. Just describe the way he looks. The description of his body is good, just add the rest of his looks too. I would like to see some more of his personality. Add some of his views on being a mutant too, how he feels about it, how he feels about humans etc.
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Post by Bobby Drake on Apr 25, 2013 17:55:09 GMT -5
Okay, I'll say APPROVED.
Now you just need one more staff member to approve before you can start playing.
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Post by Scott Summers on Apr 25, 2013 18:15:12 GMT -5
*STAMP!*
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